Saturday, January 24, 2009

A moveable vibe


We promenaded along the tropical coast of Almuñécar
under an illuminated half-moon. It was a particularly
special time of year; Holy Saturday, the night of the 21st
of March. Holy Week's processions were going down every
street and alley which had left even the palm trees under
their sway. The Mediterranean air too was as bracing as
tonic and on we ambled around town.

Inside the town's majestic church the priest lit
the Easter candles from the new fire and the Nazarenos
carried the processional candles along hewn wooden
crosses and walked out to the streets. I guess my heart
was lit even hooked from that moment on and the pasos
paraded along with our budding feelings.

I didn't know him well and we had only been
acquainted for a week, but something about him;
his manners, his eyes, and his toasted Spanish face
made me want to give in. I didn't.
I was too young and like a timorous little mouse
I shyed away. Weeks later, I found out that he
was on the rebound, but that doesn't justify
anything, does it?
I learnt a precious lesson; one of giving people
chances and that sometimes being too logical
about life and love can be sheer madness!
Years had gone and passed and
his phantom visits me at times, with all those futile
questions of why, what could have been and the zillion
"what ifs". Every procession I witnessed since makes
me feel haunted as the incense chases after me, but
deep inside I know that it all happened for a reason.


Written as my SundayScribblings for this week.

8 Comments:

At 2:16 PM, Blogger Linda Jacobs said...

Nicely poetic!

I think we all have these regrets.

 
At 3:22 PM, Blogger murat11 said...

Lovely, the tumble of thoughts and shyings in the "I didn't know him well" poem, a whispered (whispered inside and out) confession in the echoes of Almuñécar.

 
At 6:05 PM, Blogger floreta said...

reminds me too much of me. and that's a good lesson to learn.. sometimes i can be too timid or too afraid of falling feelings that i stop that from happening completely and cut contact. i've regretted not going for some of these opportunities for me to learn in the past.

 
At 5:18 PM, Blogger paisley said...

very nicely written... and a memory i am sure you are happy you have as you seem to have learned a valuable lesson from it as well....

 
At 7:36 PM, Anonymous keiths ramblings said...

Ah - what might have been! Beautifully written.

 
At 2:33 AM, Anonymous missalister said...

Hey there Doe. Stopped by from SS this week, looking, looking for something that could stop me from clicking on and on. This did. Very, very nice.

 
At 6:18 AM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Beautifully bittersweet!

 
At 8:54 PM, Blogger Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

What an inspiring visit.

Hey, today's prompt at MEME EXPRESS is PHANTOM.

Feel free to stop by and leave a comment with a link to your post today!

Blessings,
Linda

MEME EXPRESS – daily blog prompts

 

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